Whole

By Ideas



Silent tears
Stream down her face
Misguided beauty
Once more misplaced
Heavenly gaze
Crayola smile
Stripped away
For the while
Unfailing confidence
Portrayed outside
Insecurity festers
Deep inside
Poets heart
Saddened soul
Perhaps someday
She will be made whole

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Copyright 2003 Ideas
Published on Tuesday, December 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    A constant search for that missing peice... Yes, I've been through that before. Great write. and welcome to DP.

  • sweetambrosia On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, sweetambrosia (80)By person wrote:

    I love the choppiness of this, it adds to the confusion. Good job.

  • manunkind On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, manunkind (64)By person wrote:

    now this one i love, good job!

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