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Will You?
By beginning_poet
I know we're young,
but it don't matter.
I love you more
as an eternal ladder.
You mean more to me
than anything.
"I'm in love"
more than a fling.
I always question,
you love me too?
What am I saying?
Of course you do.
Before Florida,
and before you leave,
one more thing...
...Will you marry me?
(just for the record, she said yes you guys!)
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Copyright 2003 beginning_poet
Published on Saturday, November 29, 2003.
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On Friday, July 11, 2014, ArcticWolf999
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wrote:
Simple and to the point but capturing so much feeling in so few words. I hope she had said yes.
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A former member wrote:
aww thats sweet. i hope your happy
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On Saturday, October 27, 2007, Mari
(425) wrote:
hey i live in florida =)
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A former member wrote:
aww thats adorable.
awsome poem
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On Friday, July 8, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54) wrote:
Very cool. Good write.
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Drifter
(268) wrote:
Hey congrats! Good poem to.
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Lost_Soul
(34) wrote:
Congratulations!!!!!
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
YAY...I am so happy for you!!!! =)
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, beginning_poet
(8) wrote:
thank you soo much!
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