Darling, Let�s Get a Cup of Coffee

By SnowQueen

I�ll have a demitasse
Thank you.
You�re always late�
In a world where you can depend on nothing
I can depend on you, this, and us.

I love the awkwardness we both feel
Because it has been a while.
How gently you slip behind me
And slide into your seat
As if you�ve been there all the while

I love the nothingness we speak of
Holding conversations about men
And the stupid things they do
Laughing at our experiences and
Wondering why we shed tears in the beginning

I love the familiarity of it all
I can rely on your Mona Lisa smiles
Telling the same stories as if they were new
Remember that??
I know just what you mean.

I love that we can be conversing about anything
From this week�s thrift- store anythings
To the meaning of it all
Stirring away the nervousness
Letting the hours drift away..

I love that after a cup of black coffee,
You bare yourself to me
And there is such beauty in your breakdown
Creating a colourful mosaic of emotions for me
You will never be obvious.

Burnt umber thoughts linger in the air
With the scents of your espresso
In our favourite place
I�m happy when I hear
�Darling, Let�s get a cup of coffee.�



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Copyright 2003 SnowQueen
Published on Tuesday, November 25, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Railway_Butterfly On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (353)By person wrote:

    ..,I could just picture myself,sitting there in this exact scenario,thinking these exact thoughts...wonderful work..Butterfly..xxx...

  • Railway_Butterfly On Saturday, August 14, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (353)By person wrote:

    I so feel this...'I love that after a cup of black coffee,You bare yourself to me And there is such beauty in your breakdown Creating a colourful mosaic of emotions for me..You will never be obvious.'...

  • WinterGrave On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    ah, brings back good memorys, wonderful.~~~Grave

  • Mistress Morbid On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    I love that, it paints a wonderful picture.

  • frost bite On Sunday, February 1, 2004, frost bite (43)By person wrote:

    this is quite peacful, a nice write '-frost-'

  • Methos On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Methos (121)By person wrote:

    wow...this is very moving. A beautiful write..-Methos

  • purr_verse On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    I think the 'Mona Lisa smiles' line is wonderful in particular, followed closely by 'burnt umber thoughts'. Lovely. purr

  • Nomad On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Nomad (38)By person wrote:

    if you love "awkwardness" (taking you out of context) than phrases such as "I can depend on you, this, and us" must set your world aflame. Seriously (the rhythm's not the important thing), enjoyed the sentiment.

  • Nomad On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Nomad (38)By person wrote:

    very rich: last lines of stanzas have a stark beauty/meaningfulness

  • Stranger On Tuesday, November 25, 2003, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    This left me with a vivid image. As if you had painted a picture on the inside of my mind of two friends sharing coffee and secrets. I felt like I was sitting across from you smelling coffee grounds and eavesdropping on your stories.

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