Needle And Thread
By Jadednoir
I've got tears and rips, from the breath of your lips
Scars from scissors and pain
I don't want to do it again
Needle and thread
Mend my suffering from dread
Needle and Thread
pull the string, tighten up my head
Needle and Thread
In time will I heal?
Needle and thread
It's you I want to feel
Seams freshly sewn, you probably should have known
Is this pain a permanent mark?
Will I always remain in the dark
I wish you were here
Will I ever feel you near
Needle and Thread
I remember every word you said
Needle and Thread
is what they say true
Needle and Thread
Can I never be in you?
I want to just disappear
I want my thoughts to be clear
You made the hole, because your spirit
Your soul
I could never help the way I feel
I heaven, dreams will be real
Needle and Thread
Because of This i bled
Needle and Thread
Beneath the steel, soft lead
Needle and Thread
It's this life I contemplate
Needle and Thread
i guess it's my fate.
written 1/24/02
Comments on "Needle And Thread"
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A former member wrote:
Wow, this is a really great piece right here :)
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A former member wrote:
Love it, I just love it. This is exactly the kind of poetry I like.
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On Friday, December 26, 2003, Zahgurim
(29) wrote:
i really enjoy your works. very unique. i read this one several times and each time, my appreciation for it grew.
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A former member wrote:
'I've got tears and rips, from the breath of your lips' Scars I have had, scars which still remain... you cut into the heart of the matter w/ this piece.
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On Sunday, December 14, 2003, Jadednoir
(28) wrote:
speaking of lucifer, have you ever heard: 'At the heart of it all'? I wrote this while listening to it...
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, pushblood
(27) wrote:
Sally, This is the first poem I heard from your lips....This is as powerful now, as it was the first time... I wish the rest of the DP planet could hear this poem for the real feeling of how this is...I LOVE IT!!!!!...Great Poem....~P.B~