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No Discerning
By Loserland
The night holds a precious jewel
Passion the sun would kill to reveal
Darkness radiates an unusual glow
Giving your shape definite definition
Lying spread eagle on concrete
You motion me with a finger
I fall to your side like a faithful pet
There’s a demon in that skin
I am absolutely sure of it
Your weirdness often offsets you
But you don’t scare me
You don’t make me nervous
I’m for the most part unaffected
Yet strangely strongly effected
Sink your teeth into me
Flood my senses with that rush
You can feed on me
I’ll donate everything inside
Your personal genie and jester
Absorb me into you
Until there can be no discerning
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Copyright 2003 Loser Johnson
Published on Monday, October 20, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "No Discerning"
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A former member wrote:
dark.... loved it... always being controlled one of the worst things in the world
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, WinterGrave
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wrote:
mmm, kinda sexy creepy sorta...in a good way...wait, maybe bad...i dunno...lol~~~grave
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
darkly delicious weaved with a dose of sinister erotica....the passage of usage here..the last few lines...are perfection..
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A former member wrote:
dark, mysterious, amazing..one of the best ive read in some time...keep up the good work---brain
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