Once Now Lost

By Juggalotus

You used to adore me
Now you ignore me
You used to worry
Now it's a shock, you won't talk,
And leave in a hurry.
I hate you now
and the way that you treat me
Wish I knew how
to stop caring completely
Still want you to stay in my life
Even though I just get more blood on my knife
If I didn't have so many good hopes
I'd just go ahead and cut my own throat
But I still have those to look up to
And there's nothing in life
that I would undo
You've many friends, to try and meet ends
But I'm livin' fine
with naught but a few

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Copyright 2003
Published on Monday, October 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: um the fact that icp riddiculed Kurt Cobain made me hate them but nice write ~~GOTHIC~~

  • A former member wrote: I don't absolutely love ICP, but I think your writing is outstanding...keep it up, babe.

  • A former member wrote: Most people out there aren't even worth knowing, what from my own experiences and opinion. But as J once said, a Juggalo is worth ten thousand people... though there's always weeds in a field; evil, wicked men come in all shapes and sizes

  • A former member wrote: even if we try not to judge, everyone falls victim to someone who does.. Stereotyping is a process of elimination that destroys bridges and prevents us from establishing bonds of friendship and communication

  • A former member wrote: Nice Write..I liked it alot...definitely felt the emotion from that one. You're an artist without doubt. MCL...Mindy

  • A former member wrote: ...I've Been Clownified, not to many Juggalos or Juggalette's in this site. MCL.

  • Juggalotus On Monday, October 20, 2003, Juggalotus (69)By person wrote:

    Hell yeah.Juggalos worldwide. Mutha Fuckin' right.I can't wait for "Hell's Pit," great to see a fellow scrub in here.Clown love homie.

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Monday, October 20, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    kinda reminds me of a garbage song...it was going on in my head while reading....great write

  • A former member wrote: This has the rhythm of lyrics. Very smooth.

  • SilentStalker On Thursday, October 16, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...this is a nice little dark outlook on one's life struggles...you've pieced this one together well...nicely done... -Darun Scholar

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