Lost

By Bloody_Hands

Bloody marks
Mar the skin
Angered cuts
Bleed within

Time so slow
Yet speeding by
A moment left
To say good bye

Loved you once
But now you die
Forever happiness
Was all a lie

Hands were placed
Upon your chest
So now I wish
The very best

A tender kiss
Upon your cheek
No more words
Will you speak

A single tear
Down my face
No other love
Will replace

What it is
I feel for you
I slowly die
All for you

We will meet
Yet again
But will you wait
Until the end

It doesn’t matter
Anymore
For I bleed
At my very core

I wait to die
Wait to end
Now I wait
For my heart to mend

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Copyright 2003 Bloody_Hands
Published on Wednesday, October 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • GraveFlower On Tuesday, April 17, 2007, GraveFlower (240)By person wrote:

    it takes a lot of time for hearts to mend, and once they have recooperated they only tear once more and the stitches shred and reopen wounds you thought u have forgotten about...good write ~*dani*~

  • little butterfly On Thursday, May 26, 2005, little butterfly (36)By person wrote:

    that was a brilliant write so many emotions mixed up ive been through them all

  • A former member wrote: Wow, vey strong and deep. Sometimes it can be hard to get across what you want to say through a rhyme scheme, but you pulled this off very well. Good work!

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Thursday, October 9, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    a cold chill is sent down my spine

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Thursday, October 9, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55)By person wrote:

    damn another wonderful piece by you, your words reach into the untouchable depts of my souls, you are truly talented, thanks for sharing

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