No Return

By MrGrieves

start the weak
coffee and cream
they scold my tounge__________hate everyone
finds vitamins
will help the tinge
at weeks end____________its vicodin
brand heaven sent
solace in lint
pocket of god
converse a lot
notion enough
gets silent nods
___________no return
__________________im concerned

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Copyright 2003 MrGrieves
Published on Tuesday, September 30, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • KittyStryker On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    ooh. wow. another awesome write. the way you fit the spaces in there... well done, well placed. i like the slight rhyme as well.

  • Loserland On Tuesday, September 30, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    i like it. is the "Weak" a pun? cause i think that works good

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