Your In Denial

By SavageMind

You're In Denial
by
Str8 $av

A smile is 
A smile,
A tear is
A tear,
A heart stays
broken
cause it
wishes you
were near,
A Love
stays
Love
it never dies,
but you choose 
to 
Ignore it,
2 tell yourself
Lies...
You are
In Denial
and 
I am not,
and i'll
Always
Remember
what you've
Already
Forgot...

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Copyright 2018 SavageMind
Published on Wednesday, March 7, 2018.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • I IS ME On Monday, May 28, 2018, I IS ME (406)By person wrote:

    Love seems we remember. This was a good piece made great by the ending

  • midnights voice On Friday, March 9, 2018, midnights voice (971)By person wrote:

    So true when you say love never dies . The bruise never heals because our memories can't stop rubbing it .

  • SavageMind On Saturday, March 10, 2018, SavageMind (12)By person wrote:

    Right On!!

  • Just Dave On Thursday, March 8, 2018, Just Dave (457)By person wrote:

    Particularly love the end. Great poem. JD

  • SavageMind On Thursday, March 8, 2018, SavageMind (12)By person wrote:

    Thankz so much!!!

  • SavageMind On Thursday, March 8, 2018, SavageMind (12)By person wrote:

    Right On!! I've beeen outta touch with my devotion 2 my poetry &putting it out there... so thankz again! Peace! str8 sav

  • Ign0re On Thursday, March 8, 2018, Ign0re (9)By person wrote:

    Agreed, the ending was quite nice

  • SavageMind On Thursday, March 8, 2018, SavageMind (12)By person wrote:

    diggin the feedback!!! constructive criticism especially whem its genuine is one of your greatest tools!! Peace str8 sav

  • PoetessDarkly On Thursday, March 8, 2018, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    Beautifully composed

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