Your In Denial
By SavageMind
You're In Denial
by
Str8 $av
A smile is
A smile,
A tear is
A tear,
A heart stays
broken
cause it
wishes you
were near,
A Love
stays
Love
it never dies,
but you choose
to
Ignore it,
2 tell yourself
Lies...
You are
In Denial
and
I am not,
and i'll
Always
Remember
what you've
Already
Forgot...
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On Monday, May 28, 2018, I IS ME
(380) wrote:
Love seems we remember. This was a good piece made great by the ending
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On Friday, March 9, 2018, midnights voice
(957) wrote:
So true when you say love never dies . The bruise never heals because our memories can't stop rubbing it .
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On Saturday, March 10, 2018, SavageMind
(12) wrote:
Right On!!
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On Thursday, March 8, 2018, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
Particularly love the end. Great poem. JD
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On Thursday, March 8, 2018, SavageMind
(12) wrote:
Thankz so much!!!
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On Thursday, March 8, 2018, SavageMind
(12) wrote:
Right On!! I've beeen outta touch with my devotion 2 my poetry &putting it out there... so thankz again! Peace! str8 sav
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On Thursday, March 8, 2018, Ign0re
(9) wrote:
Agreed, the ending was quite nice
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On Thursday, March 8, 2018, SavageMind
(12) wrote:
diggin the feedback!!! constructive criticism especially whem its genuine is one of your greatest tools!! Peace str8 sav
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On Thursday, March 8, 2018, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
Beautifully composed