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Lost Faith
By Bloody_Hands
(Anti-Christ poem, and language)
Shadows hide the truth
Where we try to understand
Lost in a sea of despair
We cry out for a savour
Alone we sit without your love
Afraid to move and risk your wrath
Why did you never come
Your children died for you
Your voice praised above all others
Our lord to preach against our ways
We followed you forever blindly
Your words hid the lies you spoke
Manipulation is your greatest art
To control us is your highest honour
You treat us with kindness above all other
But allow us all to die by you
Where is the fucking love now?
We loved you, and we died for you!
We lived our pathetic lives
All for the sake of you My Lord
I hate what you have done
You twisted our hearts
And laughed in our faces
You destroyed our lives, forever
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Copyright 2003 Bloody_Hands
Published on Wednesday, September 17, 2003.
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Comments on " Lost Faith"
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A former member wrote:
I can find a connection in what you say, because people always find it suprising that I have a dislike for him. And I think, that you worded this in such a way, that makes it beautiful. By the way, I love your work, amazing.
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A former member wrote:
So...you believe, but you hate him...or you don't believe, but you hate the idea of such a christ...?
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On Thursday, September 18, 2003, Nightmare
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wrote:
I think we all can relate in some way. I believe there is a God I just don't understand him.. Great write - Lee ^_^
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On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
God (christ) to me is a Sgt in Dr. Seuss' army..a great fictional being to read about, but I still don't like green eggs and ham! Nice write..keep them coming..~Vel~
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On Wednesday, September 17, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
It's a lot easier to not believe, than to say you hate God. If you believe in him, but hate him...why believe? See what I'm saying....I think.
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