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No Help
By BoyBackFromWar
BOOM!
BOOM!
BOOM!
He looks up into heaven
searching for help,
but he gets no answer.
A shooting star cuts
the sky and leaves a bright,
fading path on the dark sky before
she disappears into the night.
The only thing left is
the bashing march
of the metal beast
as it gets closer.
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Copyright 2016 BoyBackFromWar
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On Thursday, March 17, 2016, Devilish
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wrote:
Damn!!! There's no way Seleno could of read lol not for her comment to be "very lovely" ... This was a very short visual into your hell .............. hello there ... i'm Devilish
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On Friday, March 18, 2016, BoyBackFromWar
(16) wrote:
Hi! I guess that everybody has a right to an opinion, even though it sometimes sounds absurd. I am new to writing so I appreciate any kind of feedback or criticism.
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On Monday, March 14, 2016, Selenophile
(22) wrote:
Very lovely.
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