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Is it the Rain?
By God Is In The Rain
Is it the Rain?
Feel the heavy air, dose of atmosphere...
Winds argue through trees, like words used to...
Searching for the light that almost disappear...
I see the eyes of heaven, and salty water fall through..
And so i wonder... please tell me my Darling...
Is it the rain... what is coming?
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On Thursday, January 7, 2016, Nimue44
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wrote:
This is exactly how my father described rain to me, when in his youth he used to live in the countryside. You've made me remember the savage yet soothing beauty of nature; and my father. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
Intense. Full of unstated emotions.
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On Wednesday, December 30, 2015, Broken Rose
(9) wrote:
I agree with the last comment, so many emotions at once, well done, I love it!
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A former member wrote:
The Last Part, It Put A Smile My Face.
Your Peom Is Short But With So Much To Say,
Sad And Cheery At The Same Time.
I Love It Thanks For Sharing
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