Love of the Pure and Corrupted

By Broken Rose

Touch me I said in my mind,
As our body's began to intertwine.

He on top,
my body didn't want him to stop.

He's hands gliding down my body,
I felt like I was in ecstasy oddly.

He's kisses moving down and down,
I felt as though I were going to drown.

staring into he's eyes,
while he's hands moved up and down my thighs.

I've finally realized that I am in love,
and finally found someone to give my innocence to which is odd.

I just hope and pray,
that he will not betray.

And will love me not forever,
but for eternity.

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Copyright 2015 Broken Rose
Published on Wednesday, November 18, 2015.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Love this piece. It's very sensual and it delivers a great message. That one moment can change a persons life. Being able to give that up to another person can be hard. Trust is key from both. Excellent!

  • A former member wrote: I would if I were him

  • A former member wrote: To trust someone with such importance.. How strange yet courageous. Your innocence to be taken away? That's a huge step in a relationship and I'm sure that this man will feel privileged to be yours for eternity and be your first. Love is a strange feeling.. So hold him close and don't let go.. As I'm sure we will do the same. You have a voice that deserves to be heard, so let it be heard.

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