In The Mist
By Nightwing
The sidewalks were endless gray highways in the city night. It was twilight,
and the last colors of the sunset had faded into a velvet darkness. The
air held a slight chill, and a mist was forming, swirling in a thick, smoky
fog that blotted out the remaining landscape. Lampposts, stationed like
soldiers, glowed eerily. And a lone figure huddled beneath their strange
light. Not much could be seen of him, a trench coat covering his more casual
dress, a hat tipped toward his brow so his face was hidden in its shadow.
He hunched forward to light a cigarette, and the smoke swirled toward the
light above, blending with the mist that created the walls of his world.
He raised his head, exhaling long and hard. A twisted smile turned his
mouth into an animalistic snarl. A few quick inhalations, and he tossed
the unfinished cigarette, stooped low to all fours, and trotted down the
gray highway in his new form. The grayness of his coat blended in with
the mist. His pace quickened. The hunt was on.
He took on the pace common to wolves, head low, level with his back, legs
moving at a quick pace, as silent as a shadow, a deadly gleam in his eyes.
No one. Not a solitary figure could be seen. He stretched low and quickened
his pace to a lope, ever watchful, ever searching. His senses were keen.
Somewhere ahead...no, over to the left. Not much farther. He slowed slightly,
ears turned forward, alert to the slightest hint of sound in the silence
of the mist. There, a light giggle. It was a young couple, embracing in
the dim light of the streetlight. Their voices were soft, mere whispers,
but he could see them now. He came to an abrupt stop. Clutching hands,
they raced up the steps toward a house, up the steps and out of the mist.
His lips turned up as he emitted a low growl. He lost them.
Wheeling round, haunches low and bristling, head and tail extended, he
tore silently down the misty highway, a lean gray shadow that floated over
the mist covered sidewalks. His wolf run carried him far to the other side
of the city at something just short of phenomenal speed. His breathing
never even quickened. He slowed his pace once again as he reached the stretch
of the city known for its nightlife. He usually avoided this strip, preferring
the quieter areas of the city. Too much going on here. It was harder to
focus. Music blared from inside most of the buildings, neon signs flashed,
their colors cutting sharply through the fog, turning it odd shades of
red and blue. He curled his lips back in disgust. A line of cars whizzed
by him, never noticing the creature whose existence was entirely hidden
in the mist. A horn blared, and someone shouted to another driver. He snarled
in response. He hated them. Hated them all. They were mundane creatures,
judging this by the superficial behavior he was forced to witness, brushing
their clothes down, primping their hair. ogling at themselves in mirrors,
laughing boisterously with friends. This is what he saw in this part of
the city, and he hated them for it. Hating them mostly because they were
free. Free. Now that was something that he actually envied them for, but
the envy turned to hate, and this hate bred a hunter, and this hunter hung
within the mist that was his prison, waiting. Waiting for one of them to
enter his domain. His eyes gleamed with anticipation, though he found himself
pacing nervously. Soon, he reassured himself. It was getting late. But
the mist was thick and would probably last till the morning sun. He had
time.
It was a good hour before the music died in the club across the street.
And it was another hour still before the people staggered out the door.
They were still laughing and carrying on. One of them was having a difficult
time walking, and needed to be helped along. They were drunk. Bah! He hated
the scent of alcohol. It was sharp and stinging, and interfered with his
senses. He waited patiently while they ambled off to their respective cars.
The street grew quieter with their leaving. One by one the neon lights
stopped their flashing, and the mist returned to its soft silver color
once more. He started out again at an easy pace, alert and undistracted.
The walls of his world were strong tonight, there was no real need to hurry.
So he continued his smooth gait from one city block to the next, self assured
by his primal instincts, one block melting into the next as the end of
one and the beginning of another were obscured by the ever thickening mist.
He swung to the right at one of the intersecting side streets away from
the city's main strip, ears forward, senses alert, eyes blazing with increased
excitement. The hunt had resumed. His body stretched longer, and lower
to the ground, not losing one pace, not once breaking stride. Footsteps
clicked on the sidewalk, discordant and unsynchronized. How many were there?
Two? No, there were three. He was sure of it. He could quicken his pace
and be upon them , taking one down for sure, but the others would surely
run, and he would lose them. No, he had to use his wits this time. As if
in answer, the wind stirred softly in a chortle, swirling the mist further
out, increasing the span of his world to the side by at least another fifteen
feet. And the creature took full advantage of this, darting off the concrete
path he had been following, racing low to the ground, past the group, now
ahead of them, leaving them a small distance behind. Two were males, the
other a female. His plan was already taking form. A bit of a challenge,
but not too hard.
A streetlight glowed softly in the encompassing mist just ahead . And
as the threesome neared it, they saw a solitary figure standing beneath
the light, his back leaning against its post, hunched forward slightly
as he tried to light a cigarette. They were just past him, just stepping
out of range of the streetlight and back into the dark mist, when they
heard him swear softly, incoherently, to himself.
"Hey buddy, you got a light? Mine doesn't seem to be working." He raised
his head just enough to see one of the males put his arm across the young
woman's shoulders, pulling her closer to his side.
" Let's go," he whispered in words too soft for any human ears to perceive.
But the strange figure standing beneath the streetlight heard it quite
plainly, and the corners of his mouth turned up in a wry smile.
"C'mon, can't you help a guy out? I just need a light." His senses still
alert, he listened as two sets of footsteps quickened, but the third set
slowed, then stopped. He had one.
"Yeah, I got a light. Hold on." The others still spoke in hushed whispers,
encouraging him to keep moving.
"I'll only be a minute, guys." A single set of footsteps could be heard
retracing their way towards the streetlight, and a lone figure soon appeared
out of the mist. "Here ya go, buddy," and he extended his hand to light
the cigarette still clamped between the two thin lips of the stranger.
The wind blew slightly, stirring the mist, causing it to rise upward,
blocking all but the faint glow of the streetlight from any watching eyes.
And two pair of eyes were straining to catch sight of their friend who
had gone back there. The mist was so thick now, they couldn't see anything.
And the silence was unbearable.
"Yo, Bob. We gotta get going. C'mon, hurry up." But the night was silent
and gave no answer to their call. Their feet shuffled nervously, as they
waited for their friend to reappear. They were impatient, and the nervousness
was quickly turning to fright. Long minutes of silence passed before they
slowly inched back down the sidewalk toward the streetlight. The mist parted
before them as they walked, and soon they stood underneath the soft glow
of light. But their friend was nowhere to be seen. Neither was the strange
man who had beckoned him back. They stood there, calling his name, but
to no avail. There was only silence, an empty sidewalk, and a lingering
mist that curled devilishly around the light that was their only source
of comfort. Beyond the light there was only thick mist and incomprehensible
dark, and they shuddered in unspoken fear of it.
Sarah broke the spell of silence in a thin, trembling voice, "So what
happened to Bob?" She paused for a moment, pulling at the ends of her long,
auburn hair until some of the strands were twisted hopelessly around her
finger. " Where'd he go? And that other guy..." Her trembling voice broke
off, and they were surrounded by silence once more. Clinging tightly to
each other, they sought comfort in each other's arms, and though left unspoken,
they both felt the same fears - they were afraid for their friend, afraid
to stay where they were, and afraid to leave what small bit of safety they
felt in the streetlight's glow. So they remained as they were, unsure of
what to do. Had they looked down, they might have seen the cigarette lighter
laying carelessly by their feet. Had they looked closer, they might have
seen the wispy fingers come out of the mist, stretching towards them like
a proffered hand. But like the lighter, this gesture passed them by unnoticed.
And as the mist thickened around it, the fingers seemed to fade into an
ordinary curl of mist, then disappear altogether. A sound not unlike a
sullen moan seemed to ride upon the breeze that carried it further into
the darkness. A shiver ran down the young couple's spines simultaneously.
"Let's get out of here." Sarah jerked her head in a nod of agreement,
and, hands still clasped, they raced down the sidewalk, so caught up in
their flight and thoughts of safety that they never noticed the gray shadow
running alongside them. Though the humans ran with all the effort they
could afford, the wolf like creature floated effortlessly along, as light
as the mist he traveled in. Keeping pace with them was no challenge, though.
This was a hunt, after all, and he should bring closure to it. So extending
his body, he lengthened his wolf strides, increasing his speed to leave
the couple far behind. He ran just far enough ahead that it would take
them some time to reach the spot where he now stood waiting, yet kept them
still within range of hearing in case they changed direction. They didn't.
The clatter of their running feet drew closer. It was time to begin.
Sitting back on his haunches, he raised his head upward, closed his eyes
till they were mere slits, drew in a breath slowly and deeply, then exhaled
the same way. The mist responded, growing thicker around him, so dense
now he could not be seen. It grew thicker still more, spreading out till
it reached its boundaries, then rising in ominous curls to the dark sky
above. Tired footsteps were approaching. He stood up, grinning in a malevolent
sneer. The footsteps were steadily slowing as they drew nearer. He was
ready.
They didn't understand why the fog was so thick, just that it was getting
harder to see. And as they felt their way through it, they noticed the
faint smell of cigarette smoke. A shadowy figure moved in front of them,
becoming clearer as the mist settled lower around him. He spoke in a sharp
pitched voice that bit through the silence, "Hey, I finally got my lighter
to work!" Sarah reeled backward at the shock of seeing the strange man
again, letting out a short shriek. Instinctively, her boyfriend stepped
protectively in front of her, confronting the stranger.
"Who the hell are you? What did you do to Bob?" There was more that he
wanted to say, but while he stood in front, keeping Sarah protectively
behind him, he was unaware of the change in the mist. Long fingers were
reaching out behind Sarah, grasping her just above the ankles, shadowy
arms wrapped themselves about her waist, pulling her further back into
the mist. She shrieked in surprise once, and the mist swirled thickly around
her. She screamed frantically as she lost sight of her boyfriend. She cried
out to him, sobbing, as she felt herself becoming lighter, and getting
pulled further and further away.
The young man spun around at the sound of her first shriek. The sidewalk
behind him was a thick cloud of fog. And there was no sign of Sarah. He
cried out to her, his voice loud, hoarse, and desperate, "Sarah! Where
are you?...Sarah!" He ran back down the sidewalk through the fog, calling
out the entire time. Her voice that had called out to him grew fainter
and fainter, until it could be heard no more. Still he looked frantically
for her, running in the direction from which he last heard her call. She
was nowhere to be found. He stood in the midst of the fog, arms hanging
limply at his sides, anxiety forcing his breath to release in short gasps.
He was helpless and perplexed. What could he do? It was the same with Bob.
There was no sign of them, yet they had to be somewhere. His eyes searched
through the mist surrounding him. A sudden movement just ahead made him
jump. He could make out the shadowy outline of someone, and that someone
was coming toward him. The shadowy figure was quite close before it became
clear enough to recognize. There was a strangeness about him that the trench
coat and pulled down hat could not hide. He stood no more than three feet
away, then raised his head slightly, just enough to show his wry smile.
"Give up, Jonathan. You won't find her. She's not here, you know."
Anger welled up inside of Jonathan so strong, he pulled back a fist ready
to attack. He had no idea how it was that the stranger knew his name. He
only knew that he was somehow responsible for the disappearance of Bob
and Sarah. And he was going to pay dearly. The stranger took a step nearer
and looked him full in the eyes. Jonathan froze in the icy stare. He had
never seen eyes like that, so cold, so vacant. And as he stood frozen,
he noticed that the mist seemed to emulate from this strange being, small
wisps curling out from the open trench coat, encircling him before they
crept skyward, and his hands seemed almost translucent as if they were
made of the mist itself. Still he was unable to move. It was as if invisible
hands held him in restraint.
The hunt was nearly over. Actually, he could bring closure to it right
now and have it done with. But that wouldn't be very sporting now, would
it? So he turned and walked away, his prisoner staring in wide eyed wonder
as the man seemed to dissipate into a downward swirl of mist. And where
the trench coated figure had been standing before, there was now a wolf
, his silver coat the same color as the mist, his shaggy fur curling and
twisting in all the same manner. Jonathan watched as the creature slipped
off, melting into the mist, and disappearing from sight. He knew he should
run, he should try to escape, but his thoughts kept slipping back to Sarah.
He didn't want to abandon her. She had to be somewhere. He had to try to
save her. His thoughts were broken when a breeze stirred within the mist,
and he felt fingers pulling at him. They seemed to be everywhere, and he
ran to break free of them. The wolf 's eyes gleamed with pleasure. The
final hunt was on.
Jonathan's footsteps fell heavily on the concrete as he fled down the
sidewalk. If he could just get out of this fog so he could see. He tried
to veer off the sidewalk toward the street. The wolf appeared at his side,
white teeth showing from behind curled lips. He ran the other way. Icy
fingers touched his shoulder. He ran faster. Shadows were slipping by him,
and he swore he could make out hushed voices. His heart was racing, and
his breath came in short gasps. He had no idea how far he had run, or exactly
where he was. But he would run till he found a way out of the mist. But
instead of thinning, the fog grew thicker until he could barely see where
his next step would fall. He didn't seem to notice the creature running
at his heels, feeding the mist with every breath it exhaled. Instead, he
stumbled forward blindly, hoping for an escape from this madness. But escape
would not be allowed.
Perhaps this game had gone on long enough. The wolf let out a low snarl.
Instinctively, Jonathan swung a quick look over his shoulder. The crack
in the sidewalk came as a surprise, just enough of a crack to catch the
toe of a shoe, and Jonathan felt himself falling. The wolf leapt through
the air above the sprawled figure, Jonathan looking up just in time to
see an unearthly transformation take place. The shaggy creature seemed
to dissolve into a thick cloud that moved and swirled , rearranging itself
until it held the semblance of a face, with a large, malevolent grin. Two
hands reached out towards him, and Jonathan dissipated into a misty cloud,
much as the wolf had just a minute before. There really was no pain, just
a lightness of being, and a feeling of emptiness. He joined hands with
the others who now pulled him to their world, and the figure on the sidewalk
was no more.
The man leaned back against the lamppost, exhaling the smoke from his
cigarette into the night sky. A low mist cowered at his feet. Beneath the
pulled down hat, was an expression of complete satisfaction. It had been
a good hunt after all, very rewarding. The walls of his world had grown
by three. Night would come to an end soon, probably within the hour. He
tossed the remainder of his cigarette toward the street, and walked off.
With each step a strange mist seemed to flow out from beneath the trench
coat, forming a wispy cloud that swirled where the figure of a man had
been. It rose slightly, lingering for just a short while, then took a spiral
path to the ground below, disappearing without a trace. And the sidewalk
was clear once again, stretching like an endless gray highway along the
streets of the city.
Comments on "In The Mist"
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On Monday, August 16, 2010, Scarrzz
(235) wrote:
Your words have a great deal of deliciously concocted suspense and imagery. You didn't even have to describe every detail, instead you wisely gave us enough of the picture and left our minds to fill in the rest. A story that captures the imagination is fun to read, and this one definitely is.
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A former member wrote:
Incredible. No doubt your talent will serve you well for many years...
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, angelunderneath
(60) wrote:
Simply amazing...Im so envious of your talent right now. Second story I have read tonight and I have not been disappointed!