Alone

By Kittichoo

Sometimes I can't stand,
All the jokes and the nonsense,
I just don't get,
Everyones happiness

Life is a rough ride,
So few things are fun,
And those so easily ruined,
By the judging eyes of others

I wish I could have,
The fun and the games,
Wish I could play,
And forget about work,
And all this pain

How dare everyone,
Make life look so easy,
How dare they do nothing,
And yet not feel dull

I hate your ease,
I hate your insolence,
I don't love what you are,
I love what I am,
And in this I realize,
I will always be alone

I'll die alone,
A wretch

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Copyright 2003 Kittichoo
Published on Thursday, September 4, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "I hate your insolence" straight true, simple, perfect. Sometimes it is the ones that say the least, which say the most. Yet you are never alone; look in the mirror...

  • Rebel_Angel On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I think everyone goes through this at least once. Anyone who is single prolly thinks it, but wait till you are not, u will never even think it! :)

  • worm On Thursday, September 4, 2003, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    a sad commentary on the all too often state of affairs created by our own wants... this is deeper than it first appears ... An expose of loneliness... "well done!"

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, September 4, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    Eek, I'd hate to have this perspective. I'll keep my optimistic opinions to myself.

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