Lionwardrobe and the pain of the lance; on friendly betrayal
By Aengri Somnia
shaft pierced in, splintered fractures;
tunnels elf-shot from this open exit
run rivulets, waves, crushing ebbs
through bloodlines, broken, all-through me.
digging nails of splinter fragments
cutting all one thought would be,
ripping rivers all-through parting
life-embedded family tree;
roots, stuck in blood and working skin
moving muscle, parting distance,
blurring lines of friend to kin.
recompenitence, feeling owed,
feel roots split rivers;
felt a crack of soul.
this revolt holds no resolution,
no disputation, word nor cause…
shocked one out in so much shrapnel;
left me
mostly scattered, scarred
left-over parts
beyond recognition,
all a mess
of broken flesh and hearts.
bruised, infected, piece of lance
piecing apart my eye, my brains
scrambled up now, good and proper
only now a hollow stays.
//I’ll King Henry it i guess, and be
a Lion; burning pridefully,
only stream distain...
bloody, ruddy, fractured four-point
-star, as once a’fore, a’far,
must come as me again//
Author's Note:
no one knifes in the back nowadays anyway... its all a bit more gory. again the // is meant to stand for italics.... so many bad henries... the one montgomery lanced, the one betraying barbarossa, an ol king hennie of the english church.infamy in a nameComments on "Lionwardrobe and the pain of the lance; on friendly betrayal"
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On Sunday, October 26, 2014, dwells
(4177) wrote:
From the modern day shrapnel to the historical lancing it seems as though you are moving from the personal and insightful towards a similarly wounded warrior from the past. War is Hell AS, but so can be living too, well done!
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A former member wrote:
I love it when titles appear different. It catches my eye. Your original title matches the style of your poem- and helps me to enjoy this well-written piece.
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A former member wrote:
Infamous indeed. The history of Kings in general is rather macabre.