My Lover (revisited and revised)

By SickSanityJenn

Show me wonder, show me greed
Slit my wrists and watch me bleed
take my heart and rape my soul
Break me down to make you whole

Look at me with love and scorn
You're lost inside both broke and torn
Through the anger love did grow
Kiss me now and kill me slow

Pilfer my money, subdue my mind
Confused and twisted up inside
Kiss my lips, touch my breast
Rip my heart out of my chest

You want more but inside I'm dead
Laying there upon your bed
Eyes fade blank, lips turn blue
There's nothing of me left for you

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Published on Tuesday, August 19, 2014. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "My Lover (revisited and revised)"

A former member wrote: Brutally honest and open piece here well done
On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250) wrote:

Thank you so much
On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, Commander_Cadaver (233) wrote:

Damn. If this is your lover, I wonder how your most hated enemy is. But yeah, a nice write dripping with emotion.
On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250) wrote:

Thank you... It sucks when old wounds reopen and fester.... Start feeling like a corpse dressed up in lies and false life
On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, Commander_Cadaver (233) wrote:

Sadly, I think that's all we really are. Just shambling corpses living a lie, baring scars and fresh cuts of the life we are forced to live. Depressing zombies.
On Tuesday, August 19, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250) wrote:

Depressing Zombies.... I like that