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Immortal
By Chameleon
*This poem is supposed to be an image of a redwood tree with these words
carved on it. Unfortunately, I don't have the image present*
If nothing
ever comes
of my life
but words
on a parched
piece of wood,
I will not
ask why-
for this life
still has
very few
ways to live
forever;
This is one.
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Copyright 2003 Chameleon
Published on Wednesday, August 27, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, May 13, 2004, sixsixnine
(476)
wrote:
fuck yeah* somehow very sentimental* 669*
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A former member wrote:
everyone feels the way this piece reflects at one point or another. I think its just in our human phsyce to want to leave a legacy to future generations upon our departure from this mortal world.**
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A former member wrote:
it is short but tell about a desire we all have, to live an imortal life
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
...And yes, I think those were my exact words in this piece...how could I possibly say it any clearer?
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On Friday, September 12, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
Since that was a question happy, here's an answer: If they were my words, then they are a part of me. Each time someone read them they would be reliving a piece of myself...besides, there is a deeper message of contentment here...for life as it is.
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A former member wrote:
I really like that. Hmm...Makes me think.
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, nell
(270) wrote:
that's kewl, would love to see the pic though
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
This is nice...we all want to be remembered! I want to see finished product with the image if possible +Fallen Angel+
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, Chameleon
(111) wrote:
I'll post the pic as soon as I upgrade my membership and finish constructing the image. It's not a real picture because I'm not one for actually stabbing a tree as great as a redwood- but I like the idea.
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