Forever Through

By SickSanityJenn

Slight whispers
Tiny whispers
Barely whispers, sweet and low

Come closer
Step closer
A little closer my beau

Pull tighter
Squeeze tighter
Please tighter, we hold

I love you
I love you
I love you, you know

As my fingers tighten around you
My eyes look right through you
Pale, you fade to light blue
My heart is nothing without you

I have no reason to trust you
Everything I've been through
No lie has ever come true
Inside violence they know you

Slight whispers
Tiny whispers
Barely whispers, sweet and low
I pour this poison down your throat

Come closer
Step closer
A little closer my beau
Kill you quicker the more you know

Pull tighter
Squeeze tighter
Please tighter, we hold
My fingers slowly grip your throat

I love you
I love you
I love you, you know
Nothing but my sorrow grows

My heart dies because of you
Trapped inside my thoughts of you
I fade to gray in the shade of you
Going over everything we've been through

I can't stand the sight of you
And my troubles concentrate on you
I lose my mind inside your truth
I will forever love you
Love you
I will forever through

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Copyright 2014 SickSanityJenn
Published on Monday, February 10, 2014.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • sheff On Sunday, July 26, 2015, sheff (137)By person wrote:

    I like the building of the relationship, then it's slow, inevitable burn. Well done

  • A former member wrote: I really like the duality of this poem. It's expressed not just in the love/hate angle but also the change of verse and pace. It creates the image of a troubled mind pulled and pushed in different directions. Great Write.

  • SickSanityJenn On Thursday, August 21, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    Thank you very much :)

  • BloodyMercy On Monday, February 10, 2014, BloodyMercy (64)By person wrote:

    Well if that isn't the epitome of a love and dark intertwined.. I'm not too sure what is. Fantastic way to structure and flow through the entire piece... well done.

  • SickSanityJenn On Wednesday, February 12, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    Thank you! For your comment and for reading :)

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