Forever Through
By SickSanityJenn
Slight whispers
Tiny whispers
Barely whispers, sweet and low
Come closer
Step closer
A little closer my beau
Pull tighter
Squeeze tighter
Please tighter, we hold
I love you
I love you
I love you, you know
As my fingers tighten around you
My eyes look right through you
Pale, you fade to light blue
My heart is nothing without you
I have no reason to trust you
Everything I've been through
No lie has ever come true
Inside violence they know you
Slight whispers
Tiny whispers
Barely whispers, sweet and low
I pour this poison down your throat
Come closer
Step closer
A little closer my beau
Kill you quicker the more you know
Pull tighter
Squeeze tighter
Please tighter, we hold
My fingers slowly grip your throat
I love you
I love you
I love you, you know
Nothing but my sorrow grows
My heart dies because of you
Trapped inside my thoughts of you
I fade to gray in the shade of you
Going over everything we've been through
I can't stand the sight of you
And my troubles concentrate on you
I lose my mind inside your truth
I will forever love you
Love you
I will forever through
Comments on "Forever Through"
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On Sunday, July 26, 2015, sheff
(137) wrote:
I like the building of the relationship, then it's slow, inevitable burn. Well done
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A former member wrote:
I really like the duality of this poem. It's expressed not just in the love/hate angle but also the change of verse and pace. It creates the image of a troubled mind pulled and pushed in different directions. Great Write.
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On Thursday, August 21, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(250) wrote:
Thank you very much :)
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On Monday, February 10, 2014, BloodyMercy
(64) wrote:
Well if that isn't the epitome of a love and dark intertwined.. I'm not too sure what is. Fantastic way to structure and flow through the entire piece... well done.
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On Wednesday, February 12, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(250) wrote:
Thank you! For your comment and for reading :)