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Dreaming
By PentaGram
I saw him again in my dream
He is real not just a gleam
We walked in the future and the past
Good dream it was blast
He will grant me with knowledge
My mind may demolish
I will do what no one cannot
They will think that I am zealot
Now I am waiting sunset
Sleeping is no more threat
Tonight I will meet his queen
Let the sleeping begin.
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Copyright 2013 PentaGram
Published on Wednesday, December 25, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Dreaming"
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On Thursday, December 26, 2013, PoetessDarkly
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wrote:
great pen. I write quite often about dreams. thank you for all your comments
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A former member wrote:
this is a good basic poem, with a little work this could be a great poem, dreamscapes are tuff! nice work!
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On Wednesday, December 25, 2013, PentaGram
(30) wrote:
Thank you I`m happy that you like it. :)
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A former member wrote:
I liked reading this, the imagery and the outlook, the perspective was just about right, and the rhythm went pretty okay. Your choice of words was clever at most points, and unique at others. Overall, this was a pretty good read with a steady rhythm scheme to it.
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On Wednesday, December 25, 2013, soul_versing
(883) wrote:
Dreaming is overrated! I enjoyed this different outlook on the dream-world, nice write. TG-
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