Feel Your Pain

By gearhead

As i lye in shambles here, on your screen my words appear 

Let my fate be a message to all, and hope you never have to take the fall 

For when you land in that pitiful place, your life revealed in its pitiful state

Your mind shall wander as images appear, you'll dread the day you look in the mirror 

For what you see may fill you with fear, at the moment the end is near

And at the bottom of this pit called life, there are no joys only the fight 

Even the strong will struggle to survive, and only the dark will cloud your eyes

So feed that fear and push on through, for i can see the darkness within all of you 

And on my screen your words i read so, and at the bottom your pain i now know.....

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Copyright 2013 gearhead
Published on Thursday, December 5, 2013.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • megaprime81 On Thursday, December 5, 2013, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Wow! This is a stunning work. I love it. 10

  • gearhead On Wednesday, March 19, 2014, gearhead (19)By person wrote:

    thank you very much=]

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