Strength of the Billow

By NRoseJ

As we draw near life's sea of impending perils,
we are ignorant of it's billows ahead.
Before we can perceive what's transpired-
we are propelled back upon the sand-
stung by the waves vigor.
Our intellect is stunned and wounded;
transparently left in an abyss of affliction.
Tears stream from reddened eyes,
and grievous, we seek for discernment.
The search proves futile, and yet,
elapsed time reconciles the past,
and our indulgent nature pardons the sea-
now temperate.
With ample assurance we rise again,
sure the next undulation will exhaust;
however, with quiet anticipation,
the billow rouses again,
ardent with stimulation.

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Copyright 2013 NRoseJ
Published on Monday, September 30, 2013.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Fighting agains the 'sea of life'.
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  • blue On Thursday, October 3, 2013, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    I am thoroughly enjoying your works. Your writing stands far apart from what is usually found on this site; that is to say your writing moves on a higher level than the typical narcissistic banal perspective of the world. You've managed to rise above the mundane and align with a deeper sense of self and the wonderments and mysteries of life. Your intelligence and worldly maturity is readily apparent in your writing. So refreshing. Thank you, I wait and wait for poets such as yourself to arrive here. ~b

  • NRoseJ On Friday, October 4, 2013, NRoseJ (30)By person wrote:

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  • blue On Friday, October 4, 2013, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    You are most welcome...

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