Blah Nag this is a dislike

By imortalone



I dislike when you mess up. Delete what you wrote. Say something wrong. Struggle for hours to try and piece it back together. And it’s never the same, if you can even piece it together. I want such to be how it was. It’s not nearly as good. And others love it and wonder why you dislike it. Yet another thing I can’t understand. A one track mind. If it’s not on track everything gets ruined. As you can tell I’m done with this. I’m off to go do something else. Cause nothing seams Important.



Posted on (09/24/2013)
- preton



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Copyright 2013 imortalone
Published on Tuesday, September 24, 2013.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Rant"

Author's Note:

one of the first things i wrote again. Last one posted for awhile. Check out other work if you want its different
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  • Flavorless On Thursday, October 3, 2019, Flavorless (15)By person wrote:

    what you dislike, others may love, my friend. thank you for sharing, I really enjoy your work!

  • A former member wrote: I like random rant poems.. Sometimes its the best way to vent

  • imortalone On Tuesday, October 1, 2019, imortalone (29)By person wrote:

    Thanks Man. Have a website up now too. https://imortalone.wordpress.com/

  • imortalone On Thursday, December 19, 2013, imortalone (29)By person wrote:

    well idk wasnt really venting, i just do it all the time as well as watch others sooo yeah

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