Will You Build... Or Break Me?

By Kainoa

Looking, gazing, wandering
Forever seeking the early morning mist of dawn
Constantly shadowed by my own moonlit haze
Foggy, Cloudy, dusk-dazed mind
Deception, misconception, betrayal
whom can I trust or run to
But you?
The mystical, mythical creature of the abyss
With you I will conquer this labyrinth
One deep breath.
.....Inhale.....
Exhale.....
Nurture the courage to rise
Will you fight my demons with me,
Find a plaace for the skeletons in my closet to rest?
Nevertheless, I must confess
Until my dying day, hour, minute, breath
You have me
All of me
Stand up
Defend , protect, claim
I am at your feet
As humble as humble comes
Seeking strength, guidance, direction
That my walls may crumble
And a new dawn, new Queen may rise
In your affection.
If you will have me,
Accept me as broken as I am...
I am yours, all yours
forevermore.
Actions are so much louder than words
And I hear YOU.
Will you open your ears enough
To hear the mouse-like pitter patters of my love?
For I'm afraid mouse-whispers
Are the loudest roars I can muster as of present...
My master, My King...
But I give you my all,
My every-little-thing.

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Copyright 2013 Kathryn Comisky
Published on Thursday, September 19, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I was sitting outside watching the moon the other night (really it was very early morning) thinking about my childhood sweetheart and how our life (and lives) have played out... i grabbed a pen and paper and this is what came out :)
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  • blue angel On Thursday, September 19, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Absolutely beautiful :)~ It is woven with such neatly placed expression* Oh, and I didn't know you before, but glad you're back none the less :)

  • Kainoa On Thursday, September 19, 2013, Kainoa (20)By person wrote:

    Thank you blue angel... it's been a while since I've written anything substantial, but this one was different... kinda like they say you don't pick your pets, they choose you... well this one definitely chose me :)

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