Backwards

By Abbyernathie

I'm headed North
on a southbound train,
tryin to stay dry
when there's no rain.
i shield my eyes
from the hidden sun,
i'm running away
when there's noplace to run.
i say the words,
but there's no sound.
i keep on losing
what i have not found.
i'm headed for the future,
but i'm stuck in the past.
i can't live like this.
i can't last.

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Copyright 2003 Abbyernathie
Published on Monday, August 18, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Fallen Angel On Monday, November 17, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    This is nice, a web of interest spooled itself about me...again great write+Fallen One+

  • GreekPhilosopher On Monday, September 1, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Great Again! You Caputure So Much. Impressive. GPhD.

  • _Andrew_ On Monday, August 25, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    awesome write... i loved the flow, makes me feel wierd inside, i loved it *~*aNDReW*~*

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 22, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    thanks

  • A former member wrote: WOW this has got to be one of my favorite poems!!! i love it. i don't think i can find anything bad to say about it nor can i find enough good to say.

  • Rebel_Angel On Monday, August 18, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    hey I like this! I often feel this way too!

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