I'll Still Be Here
By Gothchic
If all the birds in the sky would stay quiet...
I'll still sing.
If the sun didn't shine or rise in the east...
I'll still be bright.
If the moon refused to show up at night...
I'll still be here.
The question is will your eyes still be open to see me standing here?
Will you, even in the dark feel that Im still here?
Cause even when the wind did not blow anymore...
I'll whisper to you.
And if the water ran out of all the wells...
I'll still keep you cool.
And even when it rains none stop flooding the earth...
I'll shelter you.
But the question is, will you trust me enough to let me walk with you?
Will you take my hand and feel comfortable in it?
Because when there is a war within you and you know not the solution...
I'll smile for you.
And when you cry and have no one to listen to you at all...
My ears will be here.
And when you feel like no one loves you at all...
I'll love you still.
Do you see me standing right besides you when you feel alone?
Do you hear me talking to you quietly when you feel most torn?
And when the world turns its back against you...
Don't feel lonely.
And when you feel most alone with no one around you...
Don't feel torn.
And when you feel torn, alone and lonely like there is no one thinking
of you...
Then i'll still be here...
Cause i want you to know that there is nothing that will take me away from
you.
And nothing will separate me from you no matter the distance.
When you look deep within you you'll see...
That i'm wherever you are.
Comments on "I'll Still Be Here"
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A former member wrote:
That was great :) Such a beautiful poem, filled with so much love and hope. Congratulations, keep it up. ;)
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A former member wrote:
I loved this...:) So sweet. And thanks for this...lovely!!
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On Sunday, August 18, 2013, Gothchic
(35) wrote:
Thank you Jack :)
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On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, Gothchic
(35) wrote:
Thank you so much to all for your lovely comments :*
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(332) wrote:
This was sweet... with a very strong ending. Great job xoxo
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, anarchosis
(15) wrote:
to read these words... takes me back to different times when I would have given anything to hear these words. Loved every memory. Thank you ma'am.
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, kabacha
(6) wrote:
ending on such Strength - to me the last four lines are soul bleeders.....simply awesome is all i can say....a touching work....thanks for posting...
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A former member wrote:
engrossing work.. welcome to dp :)
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, Gothchic
(35) wrote:
Thank you Vineet
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A former member wrote:
wish i had someone that would say that.. o well good post
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, Gothchic
(35) wrote:
Thank you, I initially wrote it for my sisters at Christmas when they were all away from home.