When I Had Wings

By Meadowhawk

When I was young
I had wings
silvered and shining
smooth and cool

With them I soared
through boundless
cloud dappled skies
on an endless sea
of azure blue

I took wing
with my children
my uniformed boys
so handsome
and smiling

But the clouds
began to change
from white to gray
then
a frightening black

I shuddered
through
a crashing thunder
and a strange
burning metal rain

My wings
could not hold us

Down and down
spinning and turning
in a dizzying spiral
through
an ear splitting din

Lord save my children

Now I lay upon
this God forsaken patch
of barren Earth
battered
broken
and lonely

My wings are shorn
my children are lost
Father in Heaven
what have I done

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Copyright 2013 Meadowhawk
Published on Saturday, July 27, 2013.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Inspired by a photograph by Ian Broadbent and dedicated to all the brave young boys of the WW2 bomber crews. May you soar now on angel wings.
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  • Cassette On Thursday, December 21, 2017, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    This was quite a tribute... good job.

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, July 28, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...this is outstanding. fallen angels, fallen heroes...

  • blue angel On Saturday, July 27, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    A shining tribute, you have here, very heart wrenching :) Love it !!!

  • NarcissusNarcosis On Saturday, July 27, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis (94)By person wrote:

    This is very neat, cool idea, from the perspective of a WW2 bomber...well done and nicely written! ~NN

  • A former member wrote: oh Bravo!!! I loved every ounce of this poem, beautifully done with the losing of her wings AND her children... i love it when its Not a happy ending... hoook some more up!

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