Wrists so sore

By Hells Angel

Best friend banging on the door
Half dead lying on the floor
Covered in blood
Wrists so very sore
I can’t take the pain anymore
The blood is me right down to the core
I have nothing to live for
 
I’m getting dizzy
I can’t see anymore
Still searching for the truth

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Copyright 2013 Hells Angel
Published on Saturday, July 6, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i love this piece of writing. ive written a similiar piece called 'cutting'. i can feel your pain ad emotion

  • brudie On Saturday, July 6, 2013, brudie (14)By person wrote:

    A life's story, I feel. A poem of great emotion. I hope there's a way out

  • FearlessDragon On Saturday, July 6, 2013, FearlessDragon (137)By person wrote:

    I love the direct harshness of this piece. So very abrupt and realistic!

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