Love Letters (i burned them all)

By DarkAyla

Messy handwriting,
Sweet, sensual
Vanilla
Paper, scribbled on
With soft silvery pencil.
Precious words,
Don't mean
Anything
Now.
Dead silence
Pitiful cries
Hung up
Inside i die

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Copyright 2003 DarkAyla
Published on Saturday, August 16, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • KittyStryker On Monday, August 18, 2003, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    i want more description here... more desription of the letters... old? new? detail the relationship in the letters... are they won out from you carrying thm with you? crisp from you keeping them in an envelope? nice concept, tho...

  • A former member wrote: very nice. . leaves nice images i like this one

  • Six-Out On Saturday, August 16, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    It's like the silence on the other end of the line...

  • A former member wrote: i like... nice write.. ADNW

  • DarkAyla On Saturday, August 16, 2003, DarkAyla (51)By person wrote:

    *smells burnt vanilla*

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