I wait for you in vain

By bobbery

As a seedling
Awaits vital water
As it hides beneath
Scorching desert sand
I wait for you
To awaken me
As nature has ment
Heavy clouded sky's
Linger above
Unforgiving wind
Howls promises of love
Buried in wasted lands
I am withering away
Any....Day
Almost dead
Then
I feel something wet
Slow I open my eyes
Bone dry soil
Sucking up my cries
I listen for you
One final time
And close my eyes

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Copyright 2013 bobbery
Published on Tuesday, May 21, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • bobbery On Wednesday, August 7, 2019, bobbery (119)By person wrote:

    hope can keep a man alive, but it also tends to slowly eat away at you like a cancer untill you die!

  • A former member wrote: Loved this...dark and alluring...beautiful.

  • MorganaRose On Tuesday, July 2, 2013, MorganaRose (75)By person wrote:

    what perfect imagery to accompany such raw emotion....powerful write!

  • bobbery On Thursday, July 18, 2013, bobbery (119)By person wrote:

    I must thank you for the spott on comment, I am usually not so delicate! and for the fact that I am a favorite, first time for everything ha I am honored!!

  • bobbery On Thursday, May 23, 2013, bobbery (119)By person wrote:

    thank you!!

  • A former member wrote: I can feel the yearning in these words. Nicely penned.

  • Deathkitten On Tuesday, May 21, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    This is very good! I like the dark feeling it has & in that, it's saturated with lonliness from the wait. Well done!

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