Here I Lay

By BlackRobedMage


Here I lay
Upon the cold floor,
And in the darkness
I see no door

Here I lay
Frozen and still
I can't find a way out,
And I never will

Here I lay
In darkness and despair
Nothing can save me,
And they will never care

Here I lay
Still without a thought,
But then something happenens
I feel the pain that you have brought

Here I lay
In the tormented silence
The dark void
The empty space is emense

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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Saturday, August 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, August 11, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    But you can still feel....be it pain or not...so there is hope and all is not lost...Good Write..

  • Blinded_Tiger On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Agree ...

  • The Fallen Angel On Monday, August 11, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    Welcome to hell!

  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I like this. It puts a picture into my mind.

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