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Already Fallen
By BlackRobedMage
Falling into shadows
All around my room
Vile claws raking
Across my pale skin
Hellish fiends descending
Upon my limp form
To devour my soul
Break apart my mind
Eyes of pity
Look upon the darkness
No longer with hatred
But now with sorrow
Malefeasant grins
Eyes of hate
Injurious thoughts
Cruel beatings to occur
Screams of anguish
From one no longer light
Fallen into darkness
Not wanting to return
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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Saturday, August 9, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Already Fallen"
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On Thursday, September 11, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235)
wrote:
This piece is to my liking...it's haunting+Fallen One+
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On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
It got style and flow. If you want to write something els, I think you will have to return. Anyway just a thought. And this is good shit. I just see potential for something else.
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On Tuesday, August 12, 2003, BlackRobedMage
(16) wrote:
Well half of what I write doesn't get posted. Thanx and I'll try to post somemore.
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A former member wrote:
i really like this one. . it is well written
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
I agree
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