What happens when you make a deal with the devil

By closermike

I walk on the clouds,
the amazing place known as heaven
the place where golden gates mark life
where death is never heard of

but wait what is this,
as the angels take me by the arms
and throw me out of paridise

down i fell, into eternal fire
 

as i saw Lucifer
his Grinning teeth smiling at my tourture
he took a needle as thin as a horses hair,
he took the cloth of all my sins,
he took my flesh in which he had ripped

the king of lies began to sew, 
sew the red cloth of my sins into my flesh
as the blood trickled and my screams grew ever brighter


I realized, what have I done
this is what I get for making a deal with lucifer 


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Copyright 2013 closermike
Published on Tuesday, March 12, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A poem of the truth to what happens to people who make deals with the devil
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  • Devilish On Tuesday, May 28, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Oh yes . making them deals can never be taken back. i feel you.. nice to meet you sweetie. thank you for the link. much love Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Intriguing. Perhaps I shall make more deals with the Father of Deception. He may be weaving the sins into my skin forever, however. Very extravagant piece. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Interesting take, and lovely depiction welcome to DP Scholar

  • matteus On Tuesday, March 12, 2013, matteus (28)By person wrote:

    interesting.. i like!

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