Fallen Angel

By BlackRobedMage


Pain inside
Agony relentless
Silent cries
Noone can hear

Tears falling
Pools building
Broken mind
Sanity has collapsed

Shadowed eyes
Darkness surrounding
Lifeless body
That once survived

Fallen angel
Broken wings
Broken heart
Fell from above

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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Friday, August 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Rebel_Angel On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I like this one too! I like the ending best.

  • A former member wrote: i like this one too. i would really love to see some more of your work!

  • The Fallen Angel On Friday, August 8, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    Yes!

  • aNaRcHyPoEt On Friday, August 8, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (24)By person wrote:

    good job. ~ap

  • Blinded_Tiger On Friday, August 8, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    Yep short and pretty good. I miss a twist of fate. But it was enjoyable.

  • A Velvet Tongue On Friday, August 8, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434)By person wrote:

    Fly....fallen angel...up above the world so high...This poem reminds me of the lines to a great song...well done, I look forward to more of your works..~Velvet~

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