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Fallen Angel
By BlackRobedMage
Pain inside
Agony relentless
Silent cries
Noone can hear
Tears falling
Pools building
Broken mind
Sanity has collapsed
Shadowed eyes
Darkness surrounding
Lifeless body
That once survived
Fallen angel
Broken wings
Broken heart
Fell from above
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Copyright 2003 BlackRobedMage
Published on Friday, August 8, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Fallen Angel"
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On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321)
wrote:
I like this one too! I like the ending best.
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A former member wrote:
i like this one too. i would really love to see some more of your work!
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On Friday, August 8, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
Yes!
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On Friday, August 8, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt
(24) wrote:
good job. ~ap
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On Friday, August 8, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Yep short and pretty good. I miss a twist of fate. But it was enjoyable.
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On Friday, August 8, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
Fly....fallen angel...up above the world so high...This poem reminds me of the lines to a great song...well done, I look forward to more of your works..~Velvet~
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