Can I Repeat That Please?

By Virgils Vigil






My mind is stuck….

Hung up on some

Insignificant detail.

Stuck in a loop

Stuck on repeat,

 

Strike my mind – fuck.

Push past my

Insignificant thoughts of

Self – medicated loops

Repeating repeats,

 

Bash in brains for luck.

Whatever it takes,

Inappropriate force

Jamming my loop

Demented repeats

 

Stuck in repeat.

Here it is again:

Once more if you please—

I would love to write

That line once more—repeat.

 

Jam sharp objects

In the gears –

Jam the works –

Struck the loop

Strictly repeat,

 

Strictly repeating

What once has been said

The poem before this.

My words just loop,

Meaning – less repeat.

 

What’s the meaning

Of this repetition?

Reveal some flaw—or

End in decision for love

Of god don’t loop –

Stuck in repeat

 

What is stuck in my mind?

Hanging my thoughts to dry.

In sickening detail

‘Round for a loop

Never ending repeat,


My mind is stuck....








 

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Copyright 2013 Virgils Vigil
Published on Tuesday, February 5, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I'm mad. And I'm bad.
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  • Devilish On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Yes you are bad.. i love it. and repeat can be a killer no doubt. Scholar

  • Pryzm On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, Pryzm (71)By person wrote:

    ...a well scribed definition of insanity. Nice....

  • A former member wrote: the constant repeats definitely purvey madness in an awesome way it also correct me if I'm wrong shows how hard it is to let go of certain thoughts and habits i really enjoyed reading this

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