Can I Repeat That Please?
By Virgils Vigil
My mind is stuck….
Hung up on some
Insignificant detail.
Stuck in a loop
Stuck on repeat,
Strike my mind – fuck.
Push past my
Insignificant thoughts of
Self – medicated loops
Repeating repeats,
Bash in brains for luck.
Whatever it takes,
Inappropriate force
Jamming my loop
Demented repeats
Stuck in repeat.
Here it is again:
Once more if you please—
I would love to write
That line once more—repeat.
Jam sharp objects
In the gears –
Jam the works –
Struck the loop
Strictly repeat,
Strictly repeating
What once has been said
The poem before this.
My words just loop,
Meaning – less repeat.
What’s the meaning
Of this repetition?
Reveal some flaw—or
End in decision for love
Of god don’t loop –
Stuck in repeat
What is stuck in my mind?
Hanging my thoughts to dry.
In sickening detail
‘Round for a loop
Never ending repeat,
My mind is stuck....
Author's Note:
I'm mad. And I'm bad.Comments on "Can I Repeat That Please?"
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On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Yes you are bad.. i love it. and repeat can be a killer no doubt.
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On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, Pryzm
(71) wrote:
...a well scribed definition of insanity. Nice....
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A former member wrote:
the constant repeats definitely purvey madness in an awesome way it also correct me if I'm wrong shows how hard it is to let go of certain thoughts and habits i really enjoyed reading this