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Tonight
By eternal despair
despair has defeated me deep within my soul
yet my heart still fights for love
the decease of all hope brings life to your kiss
i taste death on your lips and its very inviting
tonight i hope we share the same dream
the same tears
i covet your love more than my own life
im a slave to you tonight
as the fear takes over my mind
my body is of service to you
i feel the blood trickle down my neck
and you take it away with a smile
tonight i know we share the same dream
the same love
i covet your love deep within my cold heart
im your slave tonight
you showed my a life with love and no pain
and i am your queen of the shadows
i live for blood and no more tears
tonight i love in the darkness
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Copyright 2003 eternal despair
Published on Wednesday, August 6, 2003.
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On Monday, February 2, 2004, LoneWolf
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wrote:
very awesome, love to hear more from you. ~*~Lone Wolf~*~
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On Monday, January 5, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
try writing lyrics, it might work out it the long run well done
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
It's beautiful piece...it just proves to understand the lightyou give into the darkness of lust and you will be born again
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
MMmmm dark and lovely..a combination that has fueled my intruige for years..great piece, dear...Keep them coming! ~Velvet~
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A former member wrote:
wow, so beautifully dark and sad, yet full of...wanting and love in the same. I deeply applaud this, you need to post more works, I wish to read more.
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On Wednesday, August 6, 2003, Saint_Reaper
(200) wrote:
i am just returning the favor.....i like this poem, good write keep it up......
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