Untitled

By Spikes_of_Blue

I really hope your happy,
although I know you've left,
and to see you with him hurts me,
but I guess its for the best,
he may be better than an asshole,
and better than the rest,
and how I act to him I can control,
and its not me you want,
maybe hes better for you,
better than i could be,
but its like he comes on que,
the minute you leave me,
o well, theres not much i can do.



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Copyright 2003 Spikes_of_Blue
Published on Tuesday, August 5, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dei On Saturday, January 1, 2005, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    She really hurt you. but i knew that already. your writes just a confirmation

  • A former member wrote: this is really good...short and sweet...and meaningful...keep up the good work

  • Rebel_Angel On Monday, September 1, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    I so agree!

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