hoarfrost .

By Corinthian

I
have allowed
my self to be
annoyed
by
you.





soon
you
will
know

and
the end will be
expressable.











below the bornless beyond


behold
tonight
snow will
grow
instead of
fall.








otherwhere.

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Copyright 2012 Corinthian
Published on Saturday, July 21, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

a whore with out an"I" is blind just like the pig (pg)
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  • ThuggingWithMyFannyPack On Saturday, July 21, 2012, ThuggingWithMyFannyPack (15)By person wrote:

    *shudders* burrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.. that was cold!

  • A former member wrote: Very well penned. I like that you incorporated the whole.. "Whorinthian," right? I could be mistaken, but that's what you were talking about just before this was written. It's a heavy dose of frosty feelings, I wouldn't want to be on your bad side, Ice Queen.

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, July 21, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...your title takes on new meaning when coupled w/your author's note. some men feel a cold patina of regret after using a whore. sin is a hoarfrost that strangles the soul...

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