Thoughts from a cell 1

By Awesomeshiloh

It's not the first time I've missed the train
I've got the ticket but I remain
At idle stance and live my life alone

It destroy's my soul from the inside
I can't remember when I last cried
Feels like my life's last line has just been blown

I let you in to explore my mind
Where you begin from inside this rhyme
Still I know you'll like nothing that you find

We hide our pain behind a smile
Just to refrain from that long mile
But still we feel like we're always on trial

As the youth today we have no cause
And without a voice we're at a loss
That's how the revolution will begin

The governments cojersion of the youth
Keeping us locked in an air-tight booth
So we'll start the war that brings about the end.

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Copyright 2012 Awesomeshiloh
Published on Monday, July 9, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Awesomeshiloh On Tuesday, July 10, 2012, Awesomeshiloh (5)By person wrote:

    thanks for the feedback, any tips or critisism helps. i never had any formal training and my poetry knowledge doesn't extend much past making it rhyme, lol. Solipsist was actually the first book of Rollins that i read in the pen. my favorite of his is the Mechanik

  • Devilish On Monday, July 9, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Whoa. I havent read a political post in a while ,, I love it. hello there you ... Scholar

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