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Cold White Morning
By ForestDark
Take them from me
these tears
you can have them
A winter's
offering
of liquid crystal
on this cold white day
They
fill the air
with a feeling
of change
that hangs
palpitable
from your hands
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Copyright 2012 ForestDark
Published on Monday, June 4, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Cold White Morning"
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A former member wrote:
I keep coming back to re-read it. I love it. It's beautiful. And it takes me back home to my mountain. No one but you has been able to do that for me. Thank you.
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On Friday, July 6, 2012, ForestDark
(16)
wrote:
Thank you Lux. Do you like Winter songs. Have you heard of an unrecorded song by the Stones called "Blood red wine". It reminds me of a perfect winter's night.
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A former member wrote:
This poem gets to the point and reminds me of a poem i wrote once like it.
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2012, ForestDark
(16) wrote:
Thank you...and do you still have that poem kickin' around?
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On Monday, June 4, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
WElcome to DP and this was a fine offering indeed. Also "palpable" I think is the word you needed, sorry to be the word Nazi, cheers!
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On Monday, June 4, 2012, ForestDark
(16) wrote:
!!!!! You're right! LOL. or is it write??
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A former member wrote:
This spoke to me in ways you can't imagine. The imagery for the cold...It was amazing. Reading this, breathing in, I could feel the cold rush through my lungs, with an air of wistfulness. I miss the cold. Wonderful first read for you.
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2012, ForestDark
(16) wrote:
Thank you Very much. Your comment was a poem in itself.
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