Night
By LostInDarkness
Wonderful Night
To me, the Night is the day
Im awake every
hour of every day
But the Night is when i think the best
If your like me, the Night is your best friend
It is the only true
time to be alone, to reflect
To think about life and death
To
wonder what comes next
And at Night, i feel truly alive
Like
this is what im meant to do
Me and the Night have always been friends
Even when i was a little kid
The Night just feels like home
to me
As if its where i truly belong
The beauty of the Night
Its darkness, the stars, no movement except for the slight breeze
And me, walking silently in the Night
Moving as if im a cat
hunting its prey
No one can spot me in the dark
For ive lived
there long enough it hides me
Ive been Lost In Darkness
But
it showed me its secrets, never hiding a thing
And i became its friend,
its secret lover
Its who i run to when i want to be alone
Maybe one day in the future
Ill show you the secrets of the Darkness
Just like a mother lion teachers her cub how to hunt
Just like how
ill teach you how to hunt....
Author's Note:
written at like 4 in the morning, very tired, i hope you guys likeComments on "Night"
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A former member wrote:
I agree with you. Night is my friend. The only time it's not too hot and where I can truly get lost in my head. Where I can see the souls that are twinkling brilliantly in the sky. Gaze at the moon's beautful face...
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On Tuesday, July 24, 2012, LostInDarkness
(31) wrote:
thank you, glad you liked it. and what you say is so true
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A former member wrote:
I really like this one keep it up
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A former member wrote:
night the only time u feel safe .....i like the poem i kinda find myself in it ....the breeze ,the silence remind me who i am and i'm about to loose ....great writing
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Hi LID - first "how" in last line is not needed I don't believe? This was a fine paen to the night, too bad we don't have better night vision. Perhaps you should be working the nightshift? I did it for 25 years and the only time I was tired was when the sun was rising. Cheers!
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On Sunday, June 3, 2012, LostInDarkness
(31) wrote:
yea, i dont remember putting that how there, i guess im just really tired. and i cant, my internet gets shut off on the weekdays at 2 so people wont bitch at me
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A former member wrote:
For the love of night! :)