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goth gal
By shadowy figure
she explores the underworld thats where she dwells she's a goth gal she follows her heart she adapts to the dark she's prone to the unknown her tendency is curiosity she comes out when the sun is down she's a goth gal she goes to night clubs to look for love shes somewhat of a mystery sometimes she can be found in a cemetery shes stays up long for hours of fun who i call a goth gal
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Copyright 2012 shadowy figure
Published on Friday, May 11, 2012.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I love the line dwells man ur a great writer but maybe u could center ur work next time and smaller lines but loved it keep up the great work
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A former member wrote:
Hey shadowy figure I like this poem a lot I think the way you wrote it as a run-on is what I like the most it has a young voice behind it. Good job
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A former member wrote:
nice line....."the underworld that's where she dwells" dig it.
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On Tuesday, May 8, 2012, dwells
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wrote:
Hi SF and this was insightful but maybe next time you could try to break it up into smaller lines or stanzas to make more reader friendly, rather than kinda run-on, but then maybe that's just me - you're the boss! Thanks.
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