Too much kept inside

By Bulvine

These times r hard
Knowing I never made it far
I,ve got one more try
To unleash what's trapped inside
Everything I hear is a lie
In my world I see only black skies
Too much kept insideĀ 
Nothings right
I feel like an animal that.never leaves the cage
They talk about freedom but I feel like a slave
My chest heaves, it's so hard to breath
I m in the fight of my life
A prisoner of my own mind
Too much kept inside


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Copyright 2012 Bulvine
Published on Sunday, April 8, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Bulvine On Monday, April 9, 2012, Bulvine (29)By person wrote:

    This piece was written by 10 year old daughter Nadia

  • dwells On Sunday, April 8, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Bovine I know, HMmm... Keep writing and this was an excellent piece on the smothering fear that we all feel from time to time, indeed much akin to a caged animal, but of our own design, cheers!

  • ericvonnoir On Sunday, April 8, 2012, ericvonnoir (4)By person wrote:

    i can relate to that good job

  • A former member wrote: Favorites it goes. Ty for the write much appreciated

  • A former member wrote: Very nice write

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