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She means this
By SeekingNirvana
my mind aflame with jubilee
your breath is cold tonight
feel the hatred running free
my face ensnared with fright
love me with thine heart and soul
you know the man I play
the gate is up, I've paid the toll
and now I'm here to stay
rainbows of feelings betray the mind
I cannot care alone
t'aked with me and left behind
you then begin to moan
this is't the path I chose for you
our love is something more
the soft prick of a rose for you
will enlighten to our core
the feeling now is absolute
the feeling now is final
your love for me I retribute
but will you walk the aisle?
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Copyright 2003 OneWingedAngel
Published on Tuesday, July 15, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, July 16, 2003, AshtrayDirt
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wrote:
i like.
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On Tuesday, July 15, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
this is deep darling. even in it's simplicity..I love it..~Vel~
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A former member wrote:
ah, good catch at the end. make sure you edit and spell check more carefully. also, the sentence structure flips between modern and antiquated. try to stick with just one at a time..
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