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By damien6102

 I sing of a tale of dispair and woe
an angel that god has forsaken
lost soul cast aside, left for the shadow
to ensnare, consume, and awaken

Fiend's rage consumes its desperate mind
It lashes and screams for its vengeance
Demon fights angel, their fate intertwined
til fury destroys hero's defence

as light fades away in shadow's hold
sweet lies descend and then blind
visions of a world free from wrongs unfold
will truth ever release the boys mind?

sinners will lament as they wail and cry
past follies squeeze tight on their heart
as the chorus prays for their beloved ally
only now will the true journy start.

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Copyright 2011 damien6102
Published on Thursday, December 15, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, December 15, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Wow.....I'm sorry. I'm speechless. This is such a beautiful piece, so many emotions. I'm just, I'm floored. This is poetry, true poetry. This is the most beautiful thig I've read in a long time. Just. . . .wow. Um, I don't know what else to say. *bows*

  • dwells On Thursday, December 15, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Extremely profound and thought provoking, much to consider here, thanks and well done!

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