Final Breath
By AllenTaylor
It's so hard watching you drift away
Not knowing when life ends
Borrowed time, thriving on yesterdays
Hours seem to bend into seconds
I know what I'll do
Before life slips from you
As you take your final breath
I'll be with you, there to protect
And when your body's laid to rest
I'll remember eternity
In your final breath
I wonder whats on the other side
Try to find the answer to the Questions of time
You said my time with you kept you alive
Oh how I miss you, I miss your arms tonight
Now though you passed on
I still hear your sweet. sweet song
As you take your final breath
I'll be with you there to protect
And when your body's laid to rest
I'll remember eternity
In your final breath
In your final, In your final breath
I lost my will to live for me
In your final, In your final breath
Through the stream of tears I see that
Death is an illusion
Of your absence
Author's Note:
This is a song that I wrote, written with a verse Chorus and a bridge.Comments on "Final Breath"
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A former member wrote:
Yo man, Some nice rhymes and ideas here.
Totally musical at its heart imho!
I enjoyed reading this
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A former member wrote:
This is very beautiful. It helps me to cope with loss and tragedy. Thank you so much for sharing this, you're very in tough with your muse!
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A former member wrote:
And of course by "tough" I meant to say "touch" lol!
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On Monday, December 5, 2011, Cant walk away
(30) wrote:
lovely :) I'm with everyone else I would love to hear this to music It has such heart!
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A former member wrote:
simply beautiful, I loved it.
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On Monday, November 28, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I wish I could hear this set to music. Sounds of a bitter sweetend rhyme. You leave me in awe, sir. You have my new found respect and glory. *bows*
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On Monday, November 28, 2011, AllenTaylor
(39) wrote:
I would love for you to hear it! I'll see when I can record it for you :) And thank you.
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On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I should be the one thanking you, for such a superb read. I really would love to hear it, so just let me know.
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A former member wrote:
Great write! I love the line "Death is an illusion of your absence. Truly deep. Thanks for sharing!