Final Breath

By AllenTaylor

 It's so hard watching you drift away

Not knowing when life ends

Borrowed time, thriving on yesterdays

Hours seem to bend into seconds

I know what I'll do

Before life slips from you

 

As you take your final breath

I'll be with you, there to protect

And when your body's laid to rest

I'll remember eternity

In your final breath

 

I wonder whats on the other side

Try to find the answer to the Questions of time

You said my time with you kept you alive

Oh how I miss you, I miss your arms tonight

Now though you passed on

I still hear your sweet. sweet song

 

As you take your final breath

I'll be with you there to protect

And when your body's laid to rest

I'll remember eternity

In your final breath

 

In your final, In your final breath

I lost my will to live for me

In your final, In your final breath

Through the stream of tears I see that

 

Death is an illusion

Of your absence

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Copyright 2011 AllenTaylor
Published on Monday, November 28, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This is a song that I wrote, written with a verse Chorus and a bridge.
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  • A former member wrote: Yo man, Some nice rhymes and ideas here. Totally musical at its heart imho! I enjoyed reading this

  • A former member wrote: This is very beautiful. It helps me to cope with loss and tragedy. Thank you so much for sharing this, you're very in tough with your muse!

  • A former member wrote: And of course by "tough" I meant to say "touch" lol!

  • Cant walk away On Monday, December 5, 2011, Cant walk away (30)By person wrote:

    lovely :) I'm with everyone else I would love to hear this to music It has such heart!

  • A former member wrote: simply beautiful, I loved it.

  • Ladyhawke On Monday, November 28, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    I wish I could hear this set to music. Sounds of a bitter sweetend rhyme. You leave me in awe, sir. You have my new found respect and glory. *bows*

  • AllenTaylor On Monday, November 28, 2011, AllenTaylor (39)By person wrote:

    I would love for you to hear it! I'll see when I can record it for you :) And thank you.

  • Ladyhawke On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    I should be the one thanking you, for such a superb read. I really would love to hear it, so just let me know.

  • A former member wrote: Great write! I love the line "Death is an illusion of your absence. Truly deep. Thanks for sharing!

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