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Confusion
By SeekingNirvana
they say the place is perfect
nothing is wrong there
the place they call heaven
i've been in my wildest dreams
take me once again
weakness takes me in the times i recall
this place of pristene beauty
i open my eyes to find death and hatered
the real world finds me within it's entrapment
save me from the severity of this place
i crave this life no more
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Copyright 2003 OneWingedAngel
Published on Saturday, July 5, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, CharlottesWeb
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wrote:
I think I understand this one. It involves so many different things in its description centered on only two. Nice work. ~DW~
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A former member wrote:
Not bad i like this one beter then most of your other poems i like them all but this is a outstanding poem
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