How Come You Have Brung Me Here?

By silentnomore

I sometimes wonder,
Who you are,
For i can no longer see,
Your face in this dark.

You stand there alone,
Wandering when someone would come,
I think I can help you,
The dark is where I'm from.

You have placed yourself there,
As you have placed me here,
I am now wondering,
Where have you been all these years.

You have turned the light off,
And now you cannot find the switch,
You need the generator,
For there has been a glitch.
 

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Copyright 2011 silentnomore
Published on Sunday, September 25, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Sunday, September 25, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    This is quite asexual but nevertheless speaks to a Silence of the Lambs mentality - somebody should definitely run away (just not sure who?) Maybe both of you...

  • silentnomore On Monday, September 26, 2011, silentnomore (22)By person wrote:

    asexual? lol please do explain. and i appreciate the suggestions and comments you leave. i am an amateur as you see and a lil help goes a long ways

  • dwells On Monday, September 26, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Think this poem is probably written from a male standpoint (usually I can tell but girls and generators usually don't mix). Uncertainty in the nature of this poem as to love, or lonliness - nevertheless quite nice and hope this helps, thanks.

  • silentnomore On Tuesday, October 4, 2011, silentnomore (22)By person wrote:

    Male standpoint... I am definitely all female. Although I was raised by two brothers I can guartee I am all chica All day Ery day

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