Venom

By silentnomore

I'm out of words,
I'm out of rhythm,
I have just been injected,
with snake venom.
I feel the venom,
going through my veins.
Why won't it stop?
I taste the poison once again.
It is slowly going,
directly to my heart.
It will soon come to an end,
but for now its jus a start.
I'm almost dead,
My heart has slowed down,
dig me a hole.
And place me in the ground.

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Copyright 2011 silentnomore
Published on Sunday, September 25, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Sunday, September 25, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Why won't it stop? this line does not belong as it seems that you are a willing participant, no? Interesting ...

  • silentnomore On Monday, September 26, 2011, silentnomore (22)By person wrote:

    I am a willing participant but for some after they have commited the crime of commiting suicide may feel like they have done the wrong thing and realize it is to late. i right this in their point of perspective.

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