Weeping sky

By kenneth

Some think I am weak
But I am strong
I know what I seek
Ill get it right or wrong

I must go onward
And victory ill achieve
Ill keep moving foreward
And fight for what I believe

I will keep on moving
And I will not falter
Behind me I hear them calling
To them I’ve become a stranger

It doesn’t matter to me
Cause victory is near
My desire is before me
It is right here

I hold it in my hand
And it withers away
It crumbles to sand
And it is blown away

Chasing after nothing
Like I always do
The sky is weeping
On me and you

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Copyright 2011 kenneth
Published on Saturday, August 13, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Saturday, August 13, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Hey Kenneth, save something for tomorrow. How about the third stanza, it was a little uneven. Consider the second line to read "And I will not fear danger" - at least it rhymes. An otherwise well written piece, and pardon the unsolicited advice.

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